Ayana+vs.+Camesh+-+Madeleine+Hage

--1AC can be faster but speed is something to work on over a longer period of time. --Good job being clear though! --CX of the 1NC was good but I felt like you were just asking a bunch of questions that could lead somewhere but then stopped before you got to that point. Make sure your questions have a point and get you somewhere in the debate. --Really nice overview of the case however it was more of a 2AR type of overview. You should go to case really quickly in the 1AR so you have more time on off case especially when they haven't brought up case in the block. --Be sure you're more explicitly answering their arguments. --fill speech time
 * 1A - Ayaan**

--Good order for the 2AC, that's exactly what i would have done. --You can't just say "extend all evidence" give a quick overview of each advantage that summarizes advantage and impact with key authors being extended. during the season i had a prewritten overview of each of my advantages that i could read which can be really helpful. --You don't need to read any cards on case. It's just a waste of time because they didn't put any arguments on case. --Don't do an explanation of cards in the 2AC, that's for the 1AR --Very clear 2AC good job! --this would be a great example of a 2AC to put a lot of theory in! CONDO!!!! A 2a's best friend. --put some nuanced perms on the cp--it's a good way to beat them. Also should make permutations in general --When CX-ing the 2NC don't say "you didn't answer this argument" because they have the 1NR and could answer the argument. No need to remind them that they didn't answer the argument--the judge will know. --Good job framing the debate at the top of the 2AR and framing the reasons why you will win.
 * 2A - Tiana**

-!NC be sure to say "and" or some sort of signal word when moving onto another card --Don't need to say what part of the disad your on i.e. "uniqueness" "link" "impact" --Work on time allocation. If a shell is too long you can cut out some impacts. You should get some answers on case because otherwise the aff has 100% of the aff and they get a REALLY good time trade off in the 2AC. --Don't take prep for the 1NR!!! You have 11 minutes of prep during the speech and cx. --You shouldn't need to go to the same flows that the 2NC went to, you should split the block. --Answer the 2AC arguments! Don't just extend old cards --You should fill all speech time.
 * 1N - Nilesh**

--You should probably put your computer on a stand or something, it makes looking at your cards and flow at thesame time a lot easier --The 2NC shouldn't just be card reading--you need to respond to the 2AC's arguments with cards and with logical analytical arguments --Go line-by-line down the flow of what the 2AC said to answer their arguments. --Fill all speech time. --Shouldn't read new cards in the 2nr unless there's carded arguments in the 1AR that require you to read more cards
 * 2N - Cameron**