Wilian+vs+AJassin+-+Ben+Goodman

1AC structure was like okay. Idk. Some confusing structuring issues so far as what cards go on what piece of paper (i.e. inherency, advantage separation)

1NC – idk where the poem gets you at this point. we’ll see.

1NC cx – yo they’re kinda right, I’m not entirely sure how the alt functions. I think reject the 1ac, while less poetic, makes more sense

2AC was fine :)

2AC cx – you need to clarify your interp and what exactly you’re using it for. you seem to be dodging out of part of what your framework interp actually says – if you want to do this, don’t put the part you don’t want in your 2AC (i.e. “policy actions only” shouldn’t be your interp if you just want to hedge against the performance). I think the framework is fine as read and you should just defend against the k straight up: “No, you can’t run the k. Deal with it.”

2NC – right arguments; wrong structure/timing. There were just some technical issues in your speech. I think it’s troublesome that you didn’t read more cards, and that framework was totally absent from the speech. you should be answering those gateway questions as soon as you possibly can because a late breaking fw debate is not something you can win easily (aff gets last speech)

2NC cx – it was actually ok. seemed like a lot of heads butting on both sides I think everyone should chill out at this point

1NR – I wasn’t there for dcrams lecture, reffing it does you no good. explain your claims. I know Venezuela pretty much has oil but idk just kinda lackluster on the delivery

1AR – seemed good. probably could’ve banked more on the perm, idk. good choice on just biting link, you weren’t winning that debate

2NR – what are you impacts? no real clear explanation. I have some idea obviously, I understand why colonialism is bad but why does it come before extinction? put defense down just in case you don’t win your impact takeouts from epistemology. you need a back-to-basics story of the k, don’t walk straight into the blown up debate. also, impact calculus is not an overview :|

2AR – you need to fully impact out framework. fairness and education, etc.