Tram+vs.+A-Jared+-+Marie

Don’t yell at Sam during the Neg’s speeches. Don’t tell the other debaters they should die to save resources. Just cut the rudeness out. 2AC—I think that you could have saved some prep time if you would have 2AC blocks written. You and Sam speak over each other a lot in CX—it makes it hard to understand either of you. 2AR—You need some sort of overview with impact comparison. You also need to explain the aff impacts in more than 5 seconds. 1AC—You don’t need to be spending two minutes reading primarily defensive pre-empts. I also think that if you do read pre-empts you should make it clear how you want them flowed, because you just randomly started reading them and it was unclear where you wanted me to put them. You and Troy speak over each other a lot in CX—it makes it hard to understand either of you. 1AR—The time allocation was off, most of the 2NC was appeasement/cp and it got about 20 seconds in the 1AR, it should get a little more than that, even though they don’t explicitly answer the perm on the CP there are a lot of implicit answers on the flow so you can’t just extend the perm you also need to answer the arguments that are answers to the perm just not labeled as such You should decide on a neg split before the neg block. You can always read cards in the 1NR. It seems they dropped a couple of solvency cards in the 2AC and instead of spending so much time on all the other flows they over-covered I would spend more time on the solvency flow. You should decide on a neg split before the neg block. 2NR—You should have an overview with impact comparison, and you should also spend way more time on case because so much stuff was dropped, you can’t just say “extend the stuff they dropped” you need an need to explain the cards that you are extending for it to count as an extension.
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