Tram+vs.+Cinderemy+-+Brohan

MDAW Practice Round toc =Sam – 1A=

1AC
•	Sounds good, you’re clear. •	I think you could transition a bit faster between cards •	When she asks you a question about democracy, you should wax/make stuff up about how the 18 years since demonstrate the democratic nations show restraint against conflict, and that major conflict between 2 democratic nations has largely not occurred

1AR
•	“I can explain that a bit more” – don’t tell me this, just do it •	Embedded clash •	You need to answer the appeasement DA – she read it in the 2NC •	The better argument for your analytical impact defense argument is that if the US and China have moderated tensions of Taiwan, there’s no way they’re going to fight over Latin America •	Ehhh, he can probably read new impacts in the 1NR •	You need more on politics/need substantive answers

=Troy – 2A=

2AC
•	The overview/way you extend the 1AC is inefficient – •	“Err Aff on theory” is not an argument •	The theory stuff in general needs to be changed – it’s inefficient and obnoxious to flow •	SPOT checklist on the CP •	Don’t start your argument with “Their X card is pretty terrible” – the judge in all likelihood won’t know what that specific card is. You should make the argument you are getting out of this indict, and then •	Don’t say fuck in your speech/CX

2AR
•	You need to make a “reason to reject the team not just the argument” warrant in the 2AR if you ever want to go for theory when they kicked the CP. •	You do a good job of explaining the internal/story on the Stability advantage, but you should do more on the impact/similar things on the other advantages.

=Jeremy – 1N=

1NC
•	Speed/clarity was fine for the most part •	Make sure you aren’t reading into your computer

1NR
•	Too much in this speech •	Make sure you impact your case arguments =Cindy – 2N=

2NC
•	Make sure you tighten up the line by line – •	Take less in the 2NC so that you can spend more time cleaning up the flows you do decide on

2NR
•	If you’re kicking the CP – you should focus your answers to theory on just “reject the argument not the team” •	When kicking a CP – make sure you answer a possible use of the perm (say it’s just a test of competition) •	Don’t extend your card, extend your argument and then say what card makes/supports that argument •